浅议十大书面表达常见十大错误

近年来高考英语书面表达阅卷采用新标准，要求考生使用高级句型、高级词汇，过渡性词汇和不同表达方式，从而增加文章的可读性和醒目性，诚然这些都是高考英语书面表达重要考点，然而刻苦训练达到新标准所规定要求的同时，千万不要忘了应注意的表达的准确性，这是书面表达最本质的东西，也是高考最重要的考点。

一、汉式英语

（误）Good good study， day day up.
（正） Study hard and you’ll make progress every day.
（误） There is a notice in the park， saying：“To take notice of safe； slippery sideway ”.
（正） There is a notice in the park， saying：“Watch your step. Slippery sideway.要减少汉式英语必须做到：（1）养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯，注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达；（2）平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语；（3）多读原汁原味英语。

二、关系不一致

（误）In the bedroom there are a bed， a des源于：免费论文查重站www.618jyw.com
k and a chair.
（正） In the bedroom there is a bed， a sofa， a desk and a chair.

三、词性混用

（误）60% of the students against the idea of entrance fees.
（正）60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.
（误）2 day past before his letter arrived.
（正）2 day passed before his letter arrived.

四、重复累赘

（误）The box is too hey for the weak boy to carry it.
（正）The box is too hey for the weak boy to carry.
（误） We hope to improve our work better.
（正）We hope to improve our work.
有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出现造句累赘现象。

五、选词或搭配不当

（误）Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.
（正）Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.

六、无关联词

（误）I am tired， I must go to bed.
（正）I am tired， so I must go to bed.
英语句子特点之一重“形合”，句子的各个部分由各种关联词联在一起。而汉语句子重“意合”，句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现，很多学生在写作时往往忽略这一点造成句子的错误。

七、非完整句子

（误）There were 40 foreigners came to visit our school.
（正）There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.
（正）40 foreigners came to visit our school.
（误）Without a friend will feel lonely.
（正）Without a friend one will feel lonely.
一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分（除祈使句外），如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。
八、句子缺乏统一性
（误）Being an honest man， Tom worked very hard.
（正）Being an honest man， Tom never tells a lie.
九、句子缺乏连贯性或指代不明
（误）Rose falls in love with John is in love with Mary.
（正） Rose falls in love with John， while John is in love with Mary.
句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内之间过渡自然、层次分明。而学生在习作中出现指代不明、未用过渡词语、非平行结构和语义不完整的分割句等错误。
十、标点符号误用
标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解标点符号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出现错误。
（误）《China Daily》is a great help to the English learners.
（正）China Daily is a great help to the English learners.
（误）Li Ping is not old enough， he can not join the army.
（正）Li Ping is not old enough. he can not join the army/ Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
英语无书名号，报刊、书名等单词首字母大写，或斜体；一般情况下，一个主谓结构就构成一个英语句子，句末应用句号。